In today’s competitive world, many families find it necesary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents absence
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is true that nowadays a lot of families acknowledge both father and mother need to go out for their job. Part of public say that children living in that condition will gain more income, while on others opinion children suffer support from their parents because of their lack of presence. This has become a considerable debate that it is important to look at both opinions.
Firstly, it is undeniable that with more time parents spent at work, they will get more income to prevent any unwanted financial problems. According to some researches, the additional fund that a family earned has proven to be vital to prevent financial problem in long-term spending. Furthermore, emergency fund is useful to cope with difficult situation such as paying medical bills, sustain a family when they experienced job loss and unexpectedly the existence of emergency money reduce stress level of a family because they do not need to worry about lack of money in their financial plan.
Additional fund in one family might prevent any potential economic disaster within their money management. However, because of parents excessive work and they rarely have time to spend with their children, the children usually suffer loneliness and small amount of support from their parents. To begin with, children barely spend any time with their parents as a consequence for their parents job responsibility. This resulting in tiny information parents obtain and they can not evaluate the development of their children such as the environment of school their children experience and relations with teachers or friends. Bad behavior and bullying can emerge eventually and in the most extreme cases, bullying can lead to death because lack of communication between two sides.
In summary, it is important for a family to balance their time for either work and time spent with their children as it is an important element to sustain a long healthy relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, in summary, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16772151899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72625985365 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8342939401 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350977838501 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132088958675 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730118632653 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221230315269 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761488479923 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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