Some people think that secondary school children should study
international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think
that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
In today's era of digitalization and modernization, the world has become a global village, and it is mandatory for an individual to have the information on all current affairs to survive in this competitive universal market. In continuation to this notion, some people opine that the international news should be introduced as a subject in secondary school curriculum whereas other analysts defend the idea that this subject is not of much significance for kids and shouldn't be included in the syllabus. I am a strong advocate of the former view that the international news should be an important subject for kids. In this essay, I will discuss my viewpoint.
International news is beneficial for students in many ways. First and foremost, the main advantage of this is awareness about the recent technologies and trends. By exploring technical news, pupils get awareness of the various technologies evolving and the fields which are having a good career in future. Kids can use such an information to shape their career on the right path. For instance, in the technology news section; mostly, main headlines are about the upgrade on various operating systems and user-friendly, fast applications being used in computers and mobiles. Undergraduates can interpret from such information that the computer science field has many excellent job opportunities today and tomorrow as well.
Apart from the above-mentioned advantage, sports news could also increase the interest in watching and playing games among children. This would increase their physical strength and some students could also be inspired to become an international athlete. Moreover, issues and problems mentioned in the news will make them empathetical which would eventually benefit the society. For example, during floods in Kerala, school students are actively participating in collecting relief materials for the affected people.
To recapitulate, I strongly agree with the belief that international news help students to grow mentally, physically and emotionally. Therefore, in my opinion, the government should include such a subject in secondary education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53822629969 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15925083021 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8386765063 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145897390239 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437631198237 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050019902595 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865853830949 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393737974376 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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