Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a matter of some disputes in terms of banning advertisements aimed at children. In my opinion, I completely agree with this notion since they seem to bring a wide range of drawbacks for children and their parents.
At the first of all, advertisements designed to attract children can impact negatively on the budget of their families. In fact, the advertisements contain colorful pictures, fun clips and beautiful sounds which help their companies to enhance the sold quantity of goods. However, children’s awareness is normally immature so it will not have any chance of the children defending themselves from the attraction of the advertisements. As a consequence, they can entreat their parents to meet their needs, which will waste their families’ money that should be expended for other purposes.
Secondly, health and study of the children can affect if they waste a lot of time watching the advertisements. It is clear that more time they use to watch them, less time they spend on doing other activities. It is well-known that when people do less exercise, they can be easier to be sick. Furthermore, they seem to have less time to spend on improving their relationship and developing their social skills for they do not play with their friends a lot. Also, their study can influence because not only their health deteriorate but also things in the advertisements are always ignore the mind that makes them impossibly pay more attention to their lectures.
In conclusion, I believe advertisements can impact negatively on children and their parents because they affect not only children’ health their study but also the budget of their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ements. It is clear that more time they use to watch them, less time they spend on ...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ignored'.
Suggestion: ignored
...things in the advertisements are always ignore the mind that makes them impossibly pay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18681318681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03700338377 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2872005012 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156462883242 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781135619459 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689229173343 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116069485083 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492379835828 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.