Some people think sport is important to society. Other, however, feel it is nothing more than leisure activity.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
Yes, Sports play a crucial role in the society. But, today the topic asserts that, is sports important for the people or is it a leisure activity. Through this essay, I will going to examine both points of view and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are group of people who says that games is important for everyone but why? There are number of answers related to this topic. First and foremost is they can get the national platform and bright their future. moreover, they can earn the good salary package and survive in the society easily and government also provide them government jobs as well as every facilities like as free treatment and huge discounts on every product and so on. Apart from that, sports person always keep their body fit and fine and protect their body from the diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...re activity. Through this essay, I will going to examine both points of view and shap...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...n by the end. On one side, there are group of people who says that games is import...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ional platform and bright their future. moreover, they can earn the good salary package ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58904109589 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14211712821 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705479452055 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6426633065 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15388952777 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653776478679 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702099890796 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147008492995 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107998604225 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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