Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich
countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of urbanization and the rise in popularity of fast food, people pay very less attention to their basic needs like proper diet, especially in rich nations where citizens spend most of their time in respective working locations. This is leading toward serious health problems. Obesity is one such issue with which people of all generations are suffering in the present decade. In this essay, I will suggest a number of ways to regulate this epidemic.
Obesity can be controlled by following various good practices. First and foremost, an approach is the inclusion of a proper and healthy diet. A working person prefers to have packaged or junk foods. Although, such eating materials save a lot of cooking time, yet it leads to obesity as well. Therefore, a nutritious diet should be taken, and no meal should be skipped. Moreover, an individual should do regular exercise or physical activities. Because of technology, various tasks do not involve physical exertions, therefore every individual should perform the daily workout. The activities could be regular gym sessions, playing outdoor games or doing yoga. With regular wear and tear of muscles, obesity would be controlled to a much greater extent. Subsequently, a proper routine can help in staying fit. Having meals at the proper time would help in controlling the problems. For instance, researchers have already stated that the dinner should be taken two hours before sleep otherwise the chances to have fitness issues increases.
Furthermore, the government should educate their citizens to have nutritious supper and to do proper physical activities. For example, in India, the central government is promoting yoga by organising numerous campus across the National Capital Region in order to motivate civilians to stay fit.
To recapitulate, Obesity is a very serious problem and it needs to be controlled. The government should take appropriate measures to control this problem. Moreover, every individual should also follow a healthy routine to resolve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33950617284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78308135672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2246095187 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.380952381 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728867880724 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258125495233 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452406572445 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552750280753 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525421155198 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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