some people say it is a idea for all employees tp wear a uniform at work. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Doing routine and usual thins day after day makes people get bored and tired of their lives. it’s changes that makes us feel alive. One of these routine things is wearing uniforms. So I personally hate uniforms and totally disagree with wearing it but i must say that it has some disadvantages and advantages.
These days it’s became so hard to live. People have lots of economic issues and some people just prefer to spend and save their money on things that would provide them happiness and fun Instead of spending it on cloth to wear at work. And somehow its logical I mean going on a trip would be more refreshing for some one who is working 8hours per day rather than buying cloth!
Another thing that can be counted as advantages of wearing uniforms is the time that people might spend on buying clothes. And that time can be used in other ways such as being with family, following their on interests, exercising and so on. having more time for your own pleasures directly affects your mental health and it motivates you in different ways such as working harder something that is for both individual and society beneficial.
But in the other hand these days having style is getting more and more important and it’s become one of the aspects of any bodies personality and somehow we can define someone just by looking the way he or she clothes. So I myself prefer to wear in a way that approximates my character than to just wear a single cloth everyday. and as i mentioned diversifying rises your interest in yourself and as much as you love yourself you try to love everything around you including things you do say your job. And this can lead to increasing the efficieny of the time you spend working and sufficiency is one important thing that the employers look for in employees.
At last i may say that in my opinion it’s better to let the employers have their own choice of what to wear. instead of having policies about this and forcing them to follow the rules that can be just making them uncomfortable at work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, another thing, i mean, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62465753425 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46053633772 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.300198721 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243726301899 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784964093716 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060766690188 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137851305422 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019159389809 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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