in recent times, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do shopping. is this the positive development or negative?
It is irrefutable that large shopping malls are increased in recent times which push down the businesses of small shopkeepers. According to me, this development resulted in both positive and the negative aspects.
Let us now throw some light on the positive impacts of the big shopping complexes on the consumers. There is no denying the fact that customers can get everything under one roof which is essential is routine life. To illustrate, Reliance mall assists people to get everything that is used the daily morning to evening. Moreover, these big plazas adopt different means to lure customers such as discount offers, free home delivery, and free parking etcetera. Therefore, the end user thinks about to get the benefits by doing shopping in these malls.
Let us now elaborate on the negative impacts of these large malls on the small shops. No doubt, small shopkeepers have faced a tremendous loss with the establishment of these big malls. Even some of the shops have been shut down permanently. Owing to this, their living standard has gone down and many of them are living hand to mouth. For instance, with the development of Best Price mall in Bathinda, most of the shopkeepers have closed their shops and moved to small towns. Apart from the above, in some scenarios, this shopping mall culture varnishing the local customs and traditions.
In conclusion, I think, it is a plausible issue which needs further discussion and analysis. However, as far as my concerned, big shopping malls have immense benefits to the modern society outweigh the negative prospects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...wn the businesses of small shopkeepers. According to me, this development resulted in both posi...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... establishment of these big malls. Even some of the shops have been shut down permanently. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, even so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68938226558 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0468188685 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371906967066 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110829935648 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720597466074 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21376612878 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945099386934 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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