The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is the fact that the internet technology has helped people in contacting people with friends and relatives without the boundaries of distances and cost. But some people think that the internet has made people less socialized and more individualistic. To a certain extent, I would agree that the internet has negatively affected people’s social life but if we use it in a wise and appropriate manner then it has a lot of positive aspects.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that nowadays people have several problems owing to the inefficient use of the electronic gadgets such as Mobile phones, Laptops, Kindles etcetera. They spend more time on the chatting, browsing and playing games instead to sit together with family members to talk. This less eye contact with one another results in many communication problems in the families. Moreover, It has the adverse effect on the children because they are getting isolate which inculcates bad habits and behavior in them and it becomes an uphill task for the parents to get them out of this.
On the other hand, it has been clearly seen that problems have been raised due to the improper use of the internet technology. Effective use of the internet provides us with a plethora of benefits. Firstly, Businesses has experienced a tremendous boom in the globe owing to the internet. It assists delegates of various industries who sit far away from one another, to share their memorandum and other legal writings via online mediums such as Gmail, Yahoo mail and many more. Apart from the above, in present times, a number of social networking applications have encapsulated everyone in a single internet world where people can easy to talk, see and meet others.
In conclusion, no doubt, the internet technology has changed the social environment of the families but the effective and suitable use of the internet can give more benefits to the societies.
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- Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development? 89
- Tourism has become a major source of income for all countries. Write the advantages and disadvantages of tourism. What should be done to ensure healthily tourism takes place. 78
- News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? 67
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for these behaviors? What actions can be taken to present people from moving to this problem? 67
- in recent times, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do shopping. is this the positive development or negative? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.003125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74571932458 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2740741758 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191984232539 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664122187168 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397484350778 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106746197249 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480967969707 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.