Write a letter to your friend about a job offer that can be suitable for him/her and say
Describe the job
what are the facilities available
why this job suitable for him
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that there is a vacancy on my current company for digital Analytics and I expect you to apply this job which is suitable for your qualification.
First up all, I am very pleased to heard that you have completed your P.H.D on digital computing and I am very much exited to get a party from you. There is a recruitment happening on my company and they are planning to hire who will fit in to research and analytics department and specially they are looking for P.H.D resources. Also I would like to inform that you will get lots of benefits such as bus transport facility, Food and health insurance all you can get it free in my company. Also, health insurance will cover your entire family members as well and you can expect good hike on each and every year.
I know that you are very much interested in research and development area and I hope definitely you will enjoy this job, Also, you can prove yourself on your right area.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
your affectionately,
john.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-03 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...ed to congrats you to complete your P.H.D in digital computer. Also, I like to in...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
... and specially they are looking for P.H.D resources. Also I would like to inform ...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...y they are looking for P.H.D resources. Also I would like to inform that you will ge...
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Line 4, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Food
... benefits such as bus transport facility,Food and health insurance all are free. Also...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...ok forward to hearing from you soon. your affectionately, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76404494382 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62058027537 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9550739927 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127968679329 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470956674683 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470055101862 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781712539929 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614291653879 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.