The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in availability of information influence life in today's world?
Since the dawn of humanity, people have always been in a dilemma that how to become more advanced in every day. Technological advance has just made us, being a part of this more advanced contemporary world, the Internet is which most indispensable part. Because of readily to reach, it has a very prominent effect on. In spite of other belief's, I for one, advocate about its positive influence on our lives for quite a few reasons, two conspicuous reasons are describing in the following.
The first justification for, considering the affirmative influence on people because of numerous uses of the internet is, it helps us to become more active in a submission of our own thought. Even seeing the back of a few decades, we will find that people were more afraid of raising his hand, thought that he might be the only possibilities of raising, where the internet has come being the lamb of light, led us to the end by drawing an obstacle breaker of unknown. I can draw an example of my own. A few years ago, a metropolitan park near to my residence, had been decided to demolish due to making a room for the parking. It created a severe pain in me and thought that nobody but I was not worried.after 2 or 3 days, I opened a page in a social networking site just to see the reaction of others. the number joined in that group, really surprised me a lot to see that so are like me shared their opinion as like me. We made a plan and also made a protest against them until it reached to them. As a consequent, the municipal mayor had to cancel the deal.
On top of that, spreading of an online investigative method has made the political leader to always be concerned about their work. A recent experience of mine has proved it very deeply. About a week ago, a very unknown online crime investigating blog provide a report regarding a political leader of my area with a very depth. And for that, the leader is to resign within that week. After this, all the other political leaders are getting more conscious about them and their work. It has been only possible, because of the availability of the internet.
To wrap it up, due to the aforementioned ground, I clearly think without a little doubt that the Internet has a great influence of our day to day life because of its availability to all sectors of people and because of its virtual border to control over the politics by not getting into it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, regarding, so, in spite of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51029748284 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68781617405 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54233409611 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6738742533 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.736842105 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956144876975 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261083304853 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357582568501 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612039434195 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226595171188 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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