Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
It is fact that modern life is very complex because of the revolution of the technology. For that people have always been striving to equip themselves with the essential skills that would help them to thrive and succeed. Some people believe that young people should not require abilities to be plan and organized. However, as far as The chief reason for that is young people have more abilities than others. I concerned, I believe that youth should have ability to plan and organize in this modern life. Let me shed light on my perspective in the following paragraph.
As I mentioned young have more strength physically and mentally. They can grasp complex technology easily. For the young generation it is effortless to live in modern complex world. As matter of the fact world became more complicated for the people who lack these skills. If they learn to plan and organize their schedule they can achieve success in their life without worrying about result.
Secondly, youth can achieve many if they organize their plans. As Abraham Lincoln told " if I have 60 minutes to cut down the tree, I will take 40 minutes to sharp the ax and 20 minutes to cut the tree." Plans are just like sharping ax. Youth should organize to achieve their success soon in life.
Another most noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that by gaining the skill of plans and organization, youth can save their time and money too. When they face any difficulties in their life if they have planned about the circumstances then they know the merits and demerits of that situation, also they can solve the problems without being panic in complex situation. Research also show that students who study who stick to their plans for study they do not get stressed in exam get good results in exam compare to students who do not have plans.
Let's put it in to a nut shell, in the modern life youth should learn skills to plan and organize because young people are the future of the world if they will be organized in their life than world will become best organized in all fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73278236915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37559184629 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8166044674 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376364897024 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129035667194 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992400110181 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222371424499 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163898973308 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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