Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a fact that one has to use foreign language where he is living, it will obviously create major social and practical problems. In this essay, I will discuss both of the issues.
To have a happy and secure life, it is important to reside in a society and there the medium of communication is language. If the language is foreign, it will obviously a barrier for one to communicate with his neighbor. For example, in a French-speaking society, French is preferred language of speaking. So a Tamil-speaking person will obviously face obstacles to talk with others. This means he will not be able to talk or share his views with his neighbors properly which is a serious social problem.
Not only social problems but also practical problems are major problems in a foreign language speaking society. Firstly, finding a job would be a difficult one. In Quebec, for instance, French speaking people are preferred in the job sectors, so in that place an English speaker have to face lots of difficulties to secure his place. Even if he is potential, the recruiter will prefer that candidate who has no language problem with less potentiality. Another problem that occurs in schools when a child finds himself in a new place where the others are speaking in a language which is not known to him. It takes lots of time for him to communicate with his classmates and it becomes a psychological pressure for him in the long run.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that if the language of living place is foreign, it is must that it will create social and practical problems. From communicating with neighbor to finding jobs, everywhere it would be a problem and one has to face obstacles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78156996587 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85917211273 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477815699659 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9313031482 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181639851325 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068301423245 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504200267897 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133241141359 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224157657637 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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