People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days. Discuss the causes for this situation and suggest some possible solutions.
In this modern era, homo sapiens has gone through many different changes. This evidence that people are not fit into their physical activities. Technology has increased as like a rocket in order to that man power has been reduced in terms of physical activities. I am of the opinion which we can encounter all the problems and we will find a solution for this matter.
To begin with, modern technologies has made everyone life as a sedentary life style, all men and women are spending their most of the times on gadgets such as Internet, Facebook and Whatsapp. Also, they do not have a time to do physical exercise in order to make money, In current situation, husband and wife both are working in job and they don't much concentrate on their health concerns. As a result, world unhealthy people ratio increasing day by day and hospitals are earning money lot because of these hazards issues. For instance, In World Organisation Center has taken a survey and they have released result as 64% people are unfit and they have a health issues.
In this scenario, question may raise that how we can resolve this unnecessary problems and how to avoid it? First up all, Government has to be taken responsibilities to educate to everyone about health issues and how we can overcome from this problems. In addition to this, all the companies has to be set it up Jim facilities with government approval and also they have to put a rule that all the employees will have to participate it and they can include yoga centre. For Instance, In German government has taken care of physical fitness through all the company. As a result, healthy person ratio has increased lot for the past two years.
As is clear, targeted educational campaigns and setting up more health clubs are two effectual ways to make people form healthy habits and become healthy individuals. It is thus hoped that these strategies are put into practice by the masses the world over.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76627218935 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60319557831 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9287370705 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478365134635 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046864512327 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076214877563 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305352543945 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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