Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.
By and large, This real world in which you live now is really gigantic and there are many things waiting for you to encounter such as difficulties, disappointment, and sadness. These are your lessons in your own life and You have to find the way to get through with that. Some people think the solution which is getting some suggestions from parents and friends is the best one, while others think facing them by yourself can make you learn the lessons. So I personally prefer that way which is learning by yourself than getting an advice for some reasons which I will elucidate in this essay.
First and foremost, Sometimes, learning about life may not only be a form of advice. There is not everything that can be depicted by speaking or writing, apart from that, Everyone is not the same and has different minds, which means that they probably have varied perception as well. Someone may like learning by trial and error, Although at first, they have to experience with many obstacles or mistakes , after all , these are experiences which consequently can be an effective tool for improving themselves. This method can enlighten those and they realize what to do if they face with that again.
I will bring up my friend’s case as an example, when he was a new waiter in the restaurant for a part-time job, at first, he made a lot of mistakes whether it be breaking many dishes or serving food late due to less experience about that which caused his boss angry with him. But he could get through with that just because he realized by himself what point that he had to improve.
Secondly, Having your own experiences is more worth than any suggestion because you created them by yourself and not relied on anyone. The advice which given by others wouldn’t be suitable or against your own path. So It’s better to find by yourself. Because I believe that not everyone asks for advice all the time If they do. As a result, It could make them feel like they are not themselves and they are in other ways, not their way. Anyway, It’s accurate if you have got the problem which you can’t solve by yourself, you will definitely look for other help. But It doesn’t happen all the time, Therefore The majority of your time is being with yourself not them you need to rely on and believe in yourself.
To summarize, I reiterate my preference of the way of using life by learning your own personal experience because I can learn these mistakes that I have made and develop them, and It is more precious that suggestion and It’s no need to rely on anyone to create my own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, after all, apart from, such as, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63852813853 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53068912512 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.448648139 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.055555556 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183321989075 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614448089325 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608874686651 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107746458213 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637424727555 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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