A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is certain that we humans behave outrageously on nature, especially for animals. As time is passing, more and more creatures from all around the world are being endangered by misuse. In this essay, I will discuss both concepts and express my views, as well as there will be logical conclusion.
On the one hand, human are like animals, because I believe that human origin is ape from long time ago. Therefore, it is illogical to treat animals in bad manner. For example, experts, intended to us animals for research, are caging them and even killing. Another reason that, approving negative consequence on animals, is food source. In additional, lot of animals have been vanishing for nutrition, as we human increases. In instance, each family exploit at least one livestock for winter cause in Mongolia.
On the other hand, however there are lot of people, who think about employ animal, those are always existing who feel animals have an equal right like human. Therefore, these people are feeding animals, especially such pets as dogs, cats and some type of birds. For example, my grandfather reside in country side, allowing him to breed chicks and dogs. Moreover, he is beneficiary as a man, who pick up the eggs. As result, he is exploiting animals in appropriate manner.
In conclusion, everything is not forever, human, creature and even products. Therefore, it is undeniable true that animal will be endanger somehow. Personally, the conscience that appear from human is just use animals suitably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67193113684 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2478744796 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237186407806 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068442993045 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473803595346 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132757757715 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466221386084 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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