Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some cities vehicle-free days’ activity has started to signify and encourage the people not to use the private cars, truck and motorcycles in the city center which make them realize the significant difference due to the less usage of private cars, trucks and motorcycles. People are encouraged as an alternative of using public transportation to travel from one place to another.
As nowadays continuous research is going on that how to provide the pollution free environment to the human beings. According to the researchers, they have observed that vehicle pollution is one of the reason to give preference to the public transport during their root cause analysis. As far as benefits of public transportation are concerned, we may notice that huge number of vehicles cause of excessive harmful gases in the air which are exhausted with smoke. These toxic gases contain harmful CO and NO which make our respiratory system weaker gradually may cause of dangerous diseases in future. Furthermore, another advantage of using public is to reduce congestion on the road. People have to face lot of problem due to the heavy traffic on the road which take long time to stuck-up in the traffic. One of the major benefit is also to reduce the no of accidents as well. Due to the huge no of traffic on the roads also cause increase the risk factor for accidents.
As an alternative of private vehicle, people are encouraged to use the public transportation which will make it easy for people to move around to fulfill their daily routine tasks. As public transport makes it convenient for people to travel easily but on the other hand people have also to face the difficulties due to the public transport like to wait in the queue for the buses and metros. Buses are overcrowded during the peak hours and sometime do not find the seat to sit even for long distance traveling. Besides extensive traveling, some people are old age which is hard for them to stand in the bus due to the limited no of seats for disable persons.
To sum up, comparing the both merits and demerits of vehicle-free days, we may observe that using public transport has less disadvantages comparatively. Activities like vehicle-free days motivate the people to think for the alternative to reduce the unnecessary traffic on the road to make the environment free of harmful gases and also emphasize the Government to realize to arrange the affordable best alternatives for public to travel easily and to provide the maximum facilities for them to make their life easy like by increasing the no of buses and to increase the no of routes for buses ,metros and finally by initiating the cost effective taxis for passengers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 31.9359605911 251% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1207.87684729 186% => OK
No of words: 457.0 242.827586207 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90371991247 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 3.92707691288 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79734289014 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 139.433497537 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463894967177 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 379.143842365 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.090903454 50.4703680194 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0625 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5625 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292184369294 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957885242591 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943704074238 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210683990853 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12648942582 0.0609392437508 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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