Your government has announced that it wishes to build a social house near your community. Do you Agree or disagree.
I totally agree to the decision of the state to build a social house near my community because that helps a lot the poor people. I think in this way because we all would contribute in different forms to be near to the particular group of our community. while we have our houses and protection, they dream only to have food in their houses and risk their lives. in my opinion, the social house will be the greatest idea.
Firstly, this particular group of community with low incomes is part of our life. as we find out the way to help them the social houses are perfect idea because we can supply a lot of things there such as food, clothes, furniture etc. for example when I met poor people in ordinary life always I think about the way to give something, but I have low possibility to give furniture because they live in street. in this case when I heard about the social house where they live I went there to send a bed for children and electro. but for me, that house was so far. having a social house means that a lot of people can send their furniture and much more.
secondly out of the possibility to rent a house these people risk their life living on the streets. they live in the street because do not have another choice.. for example, yesterday I head on the news that a poor man was attacked by street dogs. he lived in street and while he was going to sleep in the park there happened was attack by dogs. overall building a social house means to have food, water, and a secure life.
in conclusion will be a better life for all homeless person and poor people in my community living in a social house. in this way, they can have food, water and somewhere to sleep without risk their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30434782609 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21011559273 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453416149068 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5296181624 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5294117647 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134349069936 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546277438206 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513629519353 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896089350082 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576966918364 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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