Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such place?
Nowadays, tourists are opting for destinations where the conditions are severe, like Sahara Desert or the Antarctic, in order to gain useful experience and abilities, even though they are exposing themselves at risks. The following essay takes look at both sides of the argument.
To start with, the biggest benefit of visiting a place where the conditions are difficult is to gain abilities for surviving in such conditions. For instance, If you are exploring a place like Antarctic or Mont Blanc, where the temperature are way below zero, you will learn how light a fire, also you will learn how to find a shelter If it is too windy or it is raining heavily. No one is born with this abilities, but the concrete conditions can make someone to learn things that he/she have never done before. In addition, people are eager to visit places that are difficult to reach or survive in it, because this kind of destinations are not as crowded as common tourist attractions. Furthermore, visiting destination that is difficult to reach, rises one’s ego and self-confidence, because he/she succeed in it.
On the other hand, difficult journeys can be extremely dangerous and things can easily can go against the plan. There are several examples of travelers that do not survive or sustain serious injuries, for example during climbing mountains or rafting wild rivers. In addition, If someone get lost during his/her trip, she/he will have to be evacuated by an emergency helicopter, which usually cost a big amount of money and will also have to put in danger the lives of the rescue team.
To conclude, having a vacation in harmful condition can be extremely useful and self-esteemed. However, it can be supremely dangerous, because you can put not just your own live in danger, but also the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...is raining heavily. No one is born with this abilities, but the concrete conditions ...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ake someone to learn things that he/she have never done before. In addition, people ...
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Line 3, column 809, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
...ego and self-confidence, because he/she succeed in it. On the other hand, difficult ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ng wild rivers. In addition, If someone get lost during his/her trip, she/he will h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7651054492 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4114665118 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205696914483 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765020149121 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10062550823 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104557353518 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936985588942 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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