The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates, the sun energy trapped by green house gases from atmosphere. In general diagram explained the effect of deforestation and fossil fuels emission along with heat energy reflected to space as well.
To begin with, heat from the sun producing high amount of energy to the earth in long term. Some of the energy reflected back to the space all of a sudden and the remaining energy traps by the green house gases. As is observed in the diagram, which is happened mainly by the uncontrolled human activities. Mainly, three kinds of carbon dioxide emission such as fossil fuels used for various kinds of vehicles and factories which emits high amount of carbon dioxide in to the air. Since, some sort of gases may produce huge amount of green house gases in the atmosphere.
Secondly, cutting of trees prevent absorption of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere. Make use of deforestation would lead to lower the absorption in compared to emission. Finally, green house gases present in the atmosphere and trapped directly from the reflected energy from the earth. Such trapped energy reflected back into the atmosphere may lead to excessive heat energy in the atmosphere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...nt of energy to the earth in long term. Some of the energy reflected back to the space all ...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...amount of carbon dioxide in to the air. Since, some sort of gases may produce huge am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, second, secondly, so, well, in general, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06598984772 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60315536248 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467005076142 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.132845613 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169828546155 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780589102482 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645249626585 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137161091774 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276004214054 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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