The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
Most of the people are of the opinion that video camera presents the details of the present-day lifestyle with great precision and hence are able to persuaded the viewers of its authenticity. On the other hand, there are a few people who believe that the written form of recordings of any event are more genuine as compared to the video. I agree with the speaker’s viewpoint to a great extent. My inclination towards the same will be detailed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the foremost reason why I connect with the author’s opinion is that they are of vital use in the legal proceedings. Nowadays, the surveillance cameras at offices, supermarkets, banks, railway stations, airports etc. record the minutest details with accuracy and provide a strong evidence in the heinous cases like murder, robbery, sexual harassment, drug trafficking etc. Another area where the video cameras are used is to record live events such as concerts, matches, business convocations, etc. as it is requisite to record every single moment of such events. An apt example of this is a game of cricket in which it is essential to record complete proceedings of the tournament in order to ensure that there is prevent any bias and review decisions made by umpire.
The secondary reason why I agree with the author’s standpoint is that video recordings are quite informative in nature. For instance, we cannot get a correct picture about the lifestyle of the wild animals just by studying in the textbooks. A video describing about their habitats, hunting style, etc. would give a more descriptive information and may help to understand their living patterns in a better way. Moreover, the video camera has enabled people to store their memories of various important occasions of their lives such as birthday, weddings, etc. so that they can replay them at a later stage in their lives. These recordings store the emotions of the people and make them go down the lane of nostalgia every time they are played which cannot be done by any form of written documents.
On the contrary, there are numerous benefits of the written records as well. The most prominent use of such form of data are the legal documents such as will, contract papers, etc. where there is a formal agreement involving two parties. Furthermore, the video cameras are quite expensive and are not affordable to many people who prefer the written documents because they are cost effective. They are also efficient to carry to different places as compared to the video cameras which are quite burdensome to carry because of their heavy weight. They are also helpful when the need arises to maintain a daily note of a specific incident. For example, a teacher can know about the progress made by her student over a span of time by recording the student’s responses in her register.
Thus, to conclude the discussion I would like to say that in the present scenario, the video cameras will be certainly more beneficial as compared to the written form of documentation because of the exact details of any occurrence elicited by them. However, the use of the written records is are also useful in recording some form of data and they are not going to be obsolete till a large period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3217.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 663.0 442.535393258 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85218702866 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07432619952 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7019776404 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458521870287 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1043.1 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9707557746 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.774193548 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3870967742 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29032258065 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296225329768 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076395154446 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618392859982 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179898127193 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306885122188 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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