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Happiness considered very important in life.
Why it is difficult to define ?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness was very important in human existence. It is very difficult to define it, because your happiness was born with you when you began your life path. Happiness, what is this? Is this touchable or we can smell it, maybe we can taste it? The sound of this word sometimes gave us some positive energy. I want to discuss with you some factors of Happiness and what does it mean became happy.
Happiness is the mental and emotional state of positive and pleasant emotions. There are a lots of factors which has an influence to us mentally and emotionally. Also I want to indicate that, meaning ...
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Sentence: I want to discuss with you some factors of Happiness and what does it mean became happy.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to mean and became
Sentence: For example , happiness is the central theme of buddhist teachings and for ultimate freedom from suffering, they leads its practitioner to Nirvana, a state of everlasting peace.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and leads
Sentence: All little detail and every small event in our life is important because they changes us and our pathway to happiness.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and changes
Sentence: In buddhism more mundane forms of happiness such as acquiring wealth , good friendships in society is also recognised as a worthy goals.
Error: buddhism Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 474 350
No. of Characters: 2231 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.666 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.707 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.878 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.494 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5