As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic.
In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in
other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
You should write at least 250 words.
As everything has its limit so do have rules. Traditionally, rules were introduced with positive intention and were meant to favor the society. But in this contemporary world, there are still many countries which have imposed strict rules on children that they have tendency to take rules as restrictions
We must acknowledge that strict rules stop one to flourish. In some countries, I believe that there are some illogical and unbiased rules. For instance, female children are not allowed to go to schools for education or carry western attire. By following these rules, women don't feel independent and are most of the time being dominate by men in the society.
Nevertheless, there are certain countries which have imposed rules for the benefits of children only. These kind of rules make children well disciplined and obedient, that benefit them in long run. In particular, rules in schools by punishing the late comers, rules for exams and lectures are meant to teach the value of time.
Moreover, there are few safety rules that are being imposed on children. Driving age limit for children is one such rule. In order to create unbiased environment and smooth processing of any system it is essential that children should obey these rules and influence others as well.
In conclusion, I would say that children should have a tendency to realize the importance and purpose of rules and follow the rules that are made for their good only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance, female children are not allowed to go to schools for education or carry wes...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...attire. By following these rules, women dont feel independent and are most of the ti...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ules for the benefits of children only. These kind of rules make children well disciplined...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04564315353 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60608662 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564315352697 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8314347877 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350877406274 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123678487204 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842293243499 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20612515618 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637275477731 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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