International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
International sporting events is one of the reasons a country go through economic abyss. Some people believ that international sporting competitions are benficial to the hosting country. On the other hand, others think that those events have more disadvantages than advantages to the country. From my point of view, the cons outweigh the pros.
First, hosting international sporting events brings the hosting country in the middle of attention. Which causes many tourists to visit the country not only for watching the benefits, but also to see the country's tradition and culture, This brings economical benefits, as well as making the country better known and encourages more people to visit the country later.
However, hosting such event requires so much money and it far outweighs the income coming from tourists. The hosting country will try to make the event as admirable as possible. Therefore, the stadiums, the street decoration, the cleaning and many other things will have to be done at the top level, which will cause more money to be spent. For example, in 2014, Brazil hosted FIFA World Cup and after the event had ended, Brazil went into a deep economic abyss which brang the poverty of Brazil to its highest,
All in all, although hosting an international sporting event has advantages, it causes more problems to the hosting country then it brings benefits. Due to the fact that the country puts its economic stability in order to host an international sporting event which is a risky move for most country. The citizens of the country will suffer from the results in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...trys tradition and culture, This brings economical benefits, as well as making the country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04511278195 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59409392819 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9579265601 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246526236412 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112060306291 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978675986633 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172142028895 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650430571841 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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