It is better to have friends who are intelligent or to have friends who have a sense of humor.
People often possess different viewpoints on whether intelligent friends are better than humorous friends. Based on my personal experience and observation of life, I tend to suggest that having friends with intelligence is more beneficial than having friends with sense of humor. I will elaborate my view points in my ensuing essay.
First, I care about my academic achievement and friends with knowledge and intelligence can help me get good grade. For example, I earned degree in physical therapy and during my graduate years of my degree my friends helped me a lot. They used to share their notes and taught me how to prepare for the tests that further improved my academic performance. Accordingly, I believe that having intelligent friends is more helpful.
Secondly, I want to run a start-up of my career by opening a physical therapy center in my home town. Friends with intelligence can help me build excellent start-up team. For instance, success of physical therapy center starts with best team. But finding that talent is not easy. In such scenarios friends with intelligence and experience becomes a help. I was blessed with such a friend who supported me and thus I was able to open successful physical therapy center.
Lastly, I love to learn languages and I was also able to find some brainy friends who shares same interest with me. My fluency in English language was improved and polished through conversations with those friends. On a contrary, when I think what if I have friends with very good sense of humor and I always end up thinking that I might have get frustrated early and would have left learning the language to prevent myself from the embarrassment. This is the difference having intelligent friend verses friend with good humor.
To conclude, friend with intelligence can help in academic, career, important decisions and many more. Whereas, friend with humor can make our life euphoric but it will not be helpful eventually. I prefer to have friend with intelligence who can really help me in difficult turns of my life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...lways end up thinking that I might have get frustrated early and would have left le...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...be helpful eventually. I prefer to have friend with intelligence who can really help m...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76156670679 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531976744186 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3902162352 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391070978976 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142353437505 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14070016761 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258943274325 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109477622803 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.