Some people believe that nowadays we have a too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, in the modern world people had many choices in terms of education, jobs, lifestyle, and so on. In this essay, I agree with t he statement because, industrialization and changing standard of life status ordered plenty of opportunities than the ancient times.
To begin with, a recent changes occurred in the field of academics that, pupils offered to select the medium and types of school, as far as the financial standard of parents. Secondly, depends upon the qualification, students may get a chance to select the company, country, to be worked. Moreover, in the life standard also promote choices to establish the way of life, electronics and electrical equipments, vehicles, houses and so on for the preference of person whom the needful.
Earlier, many people suffer to go school and fulfill their interest in studies might be limited in order to the poor standard of living and less choices to be select. For instance, most of the student intented to go for school in communal hall or even in the open space altogether without discriminating preferred medium for studying. Similarly, there were less chances to go for another country or far distance office if they wants to be. To some extent, even the daily needs of livelihood was minimal as compared to recent days like an instance, electricity, fossil fuels for the various purposes. Furthermore, in comparison, technological advancement and job opportunities would be developed further and set out many ways to find a job, placements, accommodation and so on to the core in nowadays.
To sum up, plenty of choices were waiting at the gate in today’s world. In my opinion, selecting appropriate things among different ways would be the main priority for new generations among plethora of opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...cient times. To begin with, a recent changes occurred in the field of academics that...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun choices is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rder to the poor standard of living and less choices to be select. For instance, mo...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...poor standard of living and less choices to be select. For instance, most of the ...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ium for studying. Similarly, there were less chances to go for another country or fa...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... country or far distance office if they wants to be. To some extent, even the daily n...
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Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogical advancement and job opportunities would be developed further and set out m...
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Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...ts, accommodation and so on to the core in nowadays. To sum up, plenty of choices were ...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld. In my opinion, selecting appropriate things among different ways would be the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10884353741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03656736427 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.925882973 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582241730546 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021203983134 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276773837547 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333787389836 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338562245928 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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