Euthanesia, or mercy killing , has been in the new move and more recently. Many people are strongly against such a practice , but there is a growing demand to have it legalized. How far do you agree with euthanasia being legal?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is irrefutable to say that life and death are considered as human choices. Some people consider euthanasia as crime and do not support the notion; however, others argue it being help for those in chronic pain and life support. In my opinion mercy killing can be practiced at situation and this essay will highlight both aspects with reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, bedridden with chronic diseases, in comma from years are expensive and difficult for families as well as hospitals to take care of. Moreover, for people in those situations, removing life support to free them from misery and physical pain are at times referred by doctors as well. To exemplify this, country like Switzerland legalized mercy killing and recently a renowned scientist at the age of 105 opted the system. According to him he had lived his life and at that age with multiple organ failure wanted a happy ending instead of chronic pain.
On the contrary, life is a gift and making it fruitful is the motto of optimist. For them euthanasia is considered as crime and they believe death should be a natural phenomenon and this is the main reason why myriad countries hesitate to implement and support the notion. Binding people culturally and morally, and categorizing birth and death are sacred and natural some Muslim countries, for instance do not compromise in their law and has and implement strict laws for not using contraceptives and similar harsh laws for suicidal death.
To recapitulate, life is a precious gift and needed to be cared; however, in my opinion although act of killing oneself sound un-humanitarian ,at very difficult situation such as very old age with chronic disease, in comma from long time, or in life support with rare chances of survival mercy death can be opted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67231900957 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0937978417 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168819178511 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643284443239 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433121883816 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110265927299 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280366316568 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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