As computers translate quickly and accurately,learning foreign language is a waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, with the uprising of the fourth industrial revolution, technology is becoming a useful tool for people all over the world. Some theories believe learning a new language is now unnecessary due to the existence of technical methods such as computers. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement and think that the importance of learning different language is inevitable.
In present day, learning a new language is not a big problem with the help of computers. This modern tool can help people who are working and studying understand different types of languages through the translation system. However, there is a fact that we cannot bring computers with us all the time. There is a moment when we are having a face to face communication with foreigners, using a computer to translate everything they say is very inconvenient. Moreover, we have to admit that not everyone is able to have their own computers. In this situation, having the ability to speak different languages is a better choice.
At the same time, running a computer depends on many elements. I would list some factors such as battery, electricity adapter, weather conditions. Imagine you are on a rainy days, you unintentionally meet tourists who lost their way in the street. They ask you for direction but you are not able to help them because of the bad weather plus the lacking of speaking foreign language. The importance of knowing another language is necessary.
In conclusion, even though technical devices help us a lot of things including expressing different types of words. We also need to learn a new language so as to communicate more naturally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
... conditions. Imagine you are on a rainy days, you unintentionally meet tourists who ...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...s. We also need to learn a new language so as to communicate more naturally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06204379562 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95647696319 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1836185856 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197749992148 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615180667886 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395150211666 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1091788193 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034750875958 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.