Do you agree or disagree technology has made children life less creative than in the past. support your answer with reasons and examples.
We are living in a world surrounded by technology. We are getting more dependent on technology with the passage of time. Technology has brought a revolutionary change in our day to day lifestyle. As children are the part of this technology surrounded world, they are also being blessed with the advantage of numerous technology. Here the statement opines that technology has made children less creative that they were in the past. I don't agree with the statement for two main reasons. I will explore my position in the following essay.
Firstly, technology has made the children of this modern world think about a problem critically. In this modern era, the children have access to computers as well as internet. So, they can easily find the solutions or way of thinking for a problem. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a child, I used to think a lot about the working principle of the computer. Back then, I had no access to the internet. So, I asked my parents and teachers, but their answers did not satisfy me. But, my younger brother who is almost 9 years younger than me, has full access to the internet. Once he became interested in developing web pages using scripting language HTML and designing language CSS and asked me for helping him. I just told him the name of a few websites where he could learn HTML and CSS. After that, he started learning HTML and CSS from those websites. After two months, I found that he had designed a fantastic website using totally learning solely by himself. I was totally amazed.
Secondly, technology has made the world very compact. Nowadays, people can learn anything that is happening in the other part of the world. As a result, the children get to know about various opportunities around the world such that they can learn about mathematics Olympiad, Physics Olympiad, ACM ICPC programming contest, Language Olympiad that are happening all over the world. As a result, they can get a chance to participate in those competitions and can prove their creativity. For instance, last year one of the cousin sisters, Meeta, got to know about Mathematical Olympiad in Bangladesh on the internet. She was very much interested to participate in the competition. So, she continued searching various tutorials on the internet to prepare for that competition and eventually registered for the competition. When the result came, we found that she had achieved the 2nd position in the Junior category.
In conclusion, I believe that technology facilitates the children to enhance their creativity.
Because by adopting technology, the children can easily find the solutions of the questions and moreover, they can enhance their skill and prepare themselves for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98692810458 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81411998952 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505446623094 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9751349297 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12934502056 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362989349355 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598178241363 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825043328875 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705367972736 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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