In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Disucss both the pros and cons of the trend
Nowadays, in some nations, online shopping has gained in the popularity and replaced conventional shopping. I personally believe there are more benefits than drawbacks, which will be discussed below
On the one hand, There are many disadvantages when buying online shopping.
First, the buyer takes a lot of time to choose the product that you like. But in the end, the product was not as expected. Because the image has obscured the consumer.
Secondly, by the variety and eye-catching images as well as the easy purchase at low cost leads to the effect consumers buy wasted many products that they do not really need to use. This leads to a considerable amount of money
On the other hand, there are some benefits of shopping online. First of all, its convenience. Specifically, consumers do not have to wear clothes to go out and drive to get to the point of purchase. Simply put on the website and choose to put products have also have the product you like.
Second, the price is cheaper than the traditional store. Because people do not have to rent space and have high competition, all products are much cheaper. For example, young people nowadays mostly book books on tiki, which are cheaper than the market, and offer incentives as well as gifts.
Third, variety of models and easy comparison of prices as well as manufacturers together. For example, the price of Louis Vuitton shirt with Gucci
Inconclusion, although this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify for these.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e end, the product was not as expected. Because the image has obscured the consumer. S...
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Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...te and choose to put products have also have the product you like. Second, the pric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69011746462 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1178220476 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110182892866 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362322995484 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070078047199 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461376562591 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517377041985 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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