You are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Give details of your study plan
• Explain why you want to get a part-time job
• Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear James,
I am writing to inform you that I will be arriving in London during the next month i.e. 15th of November and the regular classes are commencing from 22nd November. There will be four days classes in a week from morning to afternoon and without any change in the schedule for the first semester. So, I will have an ample time in the evenings and over the weekends as the studies wouldn’t be rigorous at the initial stage.
Let me explain to you that the productive utilization of the extra time not only help me in funding my living expenses but also keeps me busy. As you are cognizant that I will be living abroad for the first time in my life and being busy with some part-time job will aid me in not losing concentration.
You have informed me that you are a member of a local community which meets bi-monthly to address the problems faced by the students. Also considering your 10years stay here in the UK, I would request you to assist me in getting a part-time job. You may ask friends in your circle if they need any domestic help or administrative assistance which I can gladly provide.
Thank you for your kind consideration
Yours truly,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57075471698 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59796915921 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.7210431782 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316297061495 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13706086362 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718651053973 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199485459448 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770032341226 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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