You and some friends at a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
• Give details of your visit to the restaurant
• Explain the reason for the celebration
• Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that yesterday, I have visited your esteemed restaurant along with my friends to commemorate an event. The restaurant was recommended to us by our office colleagues and initially, we were not taking their suggestion seriously, but I must admit that we had a fabulous evening. We reached the hotel without prior booking, and even though the manager has accommodated us.
Let me explain to you that we have planned a surprise birthday treat for our friend and we want to collaborate with the services staff to catch him off guard. The way we have celebrated the occasion not only surpassed our expectations but also made the birthday boy a jubilant. As a result, we were all happy with the arrangements.
All of us enjoyed the variety of the food and especially the unique way of the serving. We never had barbequed fruits particularly the pineapple and the watermelon. Furthermore, the services staff is experienced and very polite, they never left us unattended and we were well pampered. Additionally, they commingled with us for celebration while cutting the cake to make the special moment as a lasting memory.
We will recommend your hotel to our contacts and hope you will maintain the quality & service.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ctations but also made the birthday boy a jubilant. As a result, we were all happy with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02304147465 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909605003 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3828420856 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196431138034 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759202079473 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565887131928 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110356533463 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249638227933 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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