You and some friends at a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
• Give details of your visit to the restaurant
• Explain the reason for the celebration
• Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir,
My name is James Hopkins. I was in your restaurant yesterday with my friends at 8:00 pm and we spent 2 hours there.
Actually, We are in a football team of our school and at same day we won a match and got a first prize for our school. That’s why we are celebrating that day and one of my family member recommend your restaurant as you are well known for your hospitality and excellent quality food.
I and my friends enjoyed food and your staff co-operation. In the food the special dish which is offered by your staff was shrimps because these are my favourite and the beverages of your chefs recipes was warming. Services of your staff was also remarkable, they have smile on their face throughout and they get everything as quickly as possible. They frequently ask about if we need anything.
Overall, I admire your amenities and your scrumptious dishes. I want to cordially thank you for making our celebration night a memorable one with your kindness.
May God give you further progress.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'smiled'.
Suggestion: smiled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7679558011 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69987739209 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0146823609 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288330259268 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109278471171 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715987971634 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157626885986 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381668344468 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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