Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Starting from Pen to Pilot, there is technology involved. Technology is a part of our family, which is equally important as our loved ones, for instance we can consider mobile phones as our brain, it has every thing that completes us as a person and made our life easier in many ways that our ancestors might not have ever thought.
In starting days of technology there were many disputes for its involvment in human life, and there were creators and supprters who were so enticed with technical life that nothing has stopped them from many advancements one after and another.
With using internet it has touched the sky and going forward in multidirections with an uncalculative speed. It has been a boon and bane both, let us discuss about the advantages of the technology, for an instance Artificial Intelligence is nice blend of techonolgy and Internet, now used in many medical instruments- making of amputated parts of human body, transplatation for human organs, tansportation, automobiles- google driver less car is the best example, I can consider to explain technolgy, however, it has been not approved for public usew yet and many others which were not arduous task for early 18's and 19's people to do.Although it has given us a easier life to human being but at the same time it has taken many things from us as well, with the great advancements people have become more lazy than before, they have eventually stopped doing physical activities and want a personal robot to do minimal things being a human, which resulting a very bad effect on human species, simultaneously few advancments in chemical industries are impacting our environment as well, in the thrive to explore more and know more , we are actually forgetting that we are human and are living on earth and we have make our life habitable for our survival and others plants and animal species as well. As a resultant Technology which are supposed to upfrade our life can direct a degradation of our life.
Depending more on technology humans are becoming lesss dependent on their own intellectual, which god gifted only to them. We have to be observative about using technology and it's effects on our personal life. Excess of everything can bad, right usage should be the main obejective. We as a human are capable of doing everything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider explaining'.
Suggestion: consider explaining
...ver less car is the best example, I can consider to explain technolgy, however, it has been not app...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...task for early 18s and 19s people to do.Although it has given us a easier life to human ...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s people to do.Although it has given us a easier life to human being but at the s...
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Line 3, column 1086, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e impacting our environment as well, in the thrive to explore more and know more , we are ...
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Line 3, column 1126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the thrive to explore more and know more , we are actually forgetting that we are ...
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Line 3, column 1297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hers plants and animal species as well. As a resultant Technology which are suppos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, well, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88040712468 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80746915715 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 327.151707928 60.3974514979 542% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.8 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.3 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172519324245 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637348900989 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734252314274 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106008304656 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731744539852 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 14.1392134831 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.