What are your views on gender equality? Do you think gender bias still exists in the society.
It is irrefutable to say that however modern, educated we call our self gender inequality prevails one way or the other even in the modern society. Despite of having huge gender gap in the past, societies have transformed and are more liberal towards women than ever in the history. This essay will discuss both the views and deduce a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, inequality prevailed in different forms as the history shows society as misogynistic and women were always dominated by the men. Furthermore, women were not allowed to vote, educate or even give their opinion and were treated as objects and were confined in house hold activities. For instance, if we look at the history we find very less women in the topnotch position in offices. Lack of education and confined in household activities hindered them from growing professionally, so were limited to houses.
On the contrary, the situation is not same anymore changed and we see women at workplaces, ruling countries; moreover, almost equally as men. For instance, the queen of Britain has been in the throne from around 80 years which is achievement in itself. Education plays vital role for the change and myriad nationals and international organizations are working toward women empowerment. And the women literacy rate has burgeoned significantly over the past decade which is a small step toward reducing gender inequality.
To recapitulate, the world has become more accepting in ways but things like equal pay at work, bias in working situations still prevails in the society. As the society is built misogynist and full of male chauvinist, so educating both male and female is utmost priority to reduce gender inequality.
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: equally; as; just as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15107913669 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83497969665 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9509943703 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121396038279 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398184483551 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431178633469 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08330876595 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611928264806 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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