Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum.
It is very important that schools teach continue to allocate a few hours to teach children sports because it helps them stay fit, promotes teamwork and some children make a career out of it. I strongly agree that it is the duty of the school to ensure children have steady exercise since they spend longer time in school.
To begin with, learning sports in school helps to build team spirit in children. This skill is useful for adult life. In addition, it encourages children to have a competitive mind which is so important in this modern world. Moreover, many successful business tycoons were once sportsmen. Taking football game as an example, it requires eleven players to play a football with a common aim of scoring a goal in an opponent’s goalpost. In order to achieve this aim, the players need to work in unison and be enduring for 60 minutes till the match comes to an end. Therefore, the role of school sport cannot be overlooked.
Furthermore,learning sports in school is entertaining and helps promote socialization amongst children. Research has shown that children becoming very lively and make friends during sport lessons. In same vein, some children make a career choice out of their favorite sport. For example, Serena Williams started playing Tennis game while she was in high school and today she is known worldwide as a successful sportswoman.
In conclusion, it is the obligation of school to create time to teach children sport because the lessons learned are usually beneficial in later years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , learning
...sport cannot be overlooked. Furthermore,learning sports in school is entertaining and he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99215686275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79758230327 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7978614823 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263341980929 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935944220249 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832473188867 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1719551373 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505017977226 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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