You recently purchased an item of furniture that was faulty. You telephoned the shop about the problem[s] and were asked to put your complaint in writing. Write a letter to the shop.
In your letter
•explain what the problem[s) is/are
•explain if anything was done to improve the situation
•say what you would like the shop to do.
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to the broken table that I purchased from your store last week. I had called yesterday and was informed to place the grievance in the form of a letter.
The table was delivered at my house earlier this week. It was then that I discovered a visible crack on one of the table's wooden legs. I believe it could have gotten damaged during the shipping process. The fault in the furniture could be fixed by a carpenter. However, I wish to receive a new and intact piece.
I plan to have a party at my apartment next week and I would appreciate it if you could have the new table sent to my place before Wednesday, next week. I advise you to please conduct a quality check before my package is shipped out from your establishment.
I request you to rectify this issue in a speedy and efficient manner. Furthermore, I am awaiting a quick and favourable response.
Yours Sincerely,
Sasuke Uchiha
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| 2018-10-12 | Sasuke0789 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90797546012 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17164897308 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748466257669 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.430115785 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.1428571429 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6428571429 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193368333472 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508376108028 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599090097681 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143625550741 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895956251782 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.