The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different mode of transport.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different mode of transport.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Submitted by javad_70 on Fri, 10/12/2018 - 11:18

Given graph depicts the amount of goods transported in UK between 1974 and 2002. Road, water, rail and pipeline are the four diverse sorts of transport whish are illustrated.
Overall, road transportation is the main manner and pipeline has the lowest shares of good transportation, during the so-called interval.
In 1974, road was the predominant technique for good transportation by more than 70 million tonnes and pipeline by less than 5 million tonnes, was at the end of the list. Between these two ways, rail and water has the approximately the same stock of goods transported, nevertheless, in 2002, popularity of transportation by water mode, increased and exceeded from 60 million toones but pipeline mode remained at the same amount of 1974.
Road mode transportation increased consistently, except 1975-1980 and 1992-1995, and it remained the most popular mode among other alternatives, in addition, although pipeline usage as a transport technique increased consistently, it yet was at the end of the list. It is worth to say that, exactly, in the same interval that usage of road for transporting the goods increased, the increasing rate of pipeline was more dramatic than other times.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uring the so-called interval. In 1974, road was the predominant technique for g...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the approximately the'. Did you mean 'approximately the'?
Suggestion: approximately the
...ween these two ways, rail and water has the approximately the same stock of goods transported, nevert...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27083333333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14900502364 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9202437605 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.571428571 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237472696534 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140428936204 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872560058626 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172917227999 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762210609887 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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