The graph shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Stramouth School from 2006 to the present.
Summarise the information by selecting, and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about how many library books have been read by boys and girls at Starmouth school from 2009 to 2012.
The number of books read by girls stood at around 25 books in 2009. That was went up gradually by 15 books to 40 books in 2010. Furthermore, that was reached a peak at 140 books in 2012. That was the highest number for over four period.
Otherwise, many books read by boys stood at 50 in 2009 and rose steadily by 30 books to 80 books in 2010, afterward in 2010 that was climbed up to 100 books. In 2011, the boys and the girls have the same number of books read by them, at approximately 100 books. Then, that was decreased slowly by 20 books to 80 books.
Overall, the girls have a good reading habit in over four period. That number was always increased and go upward every years into the peak at 140 books in 2012. The boys have good reading habit too but in 2011 that was fell to below the level of girls in 2012.
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Sentence: That was went up gradually by 15 books to 40 books in 2010.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to was and went
Sentence: The boys have good reading habit too but in 2011 that was fell to below the level of girls in 2012.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to was and fell
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 184 200
No. of Characters: 744 1000
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.043 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 17 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 10 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.552 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.673 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
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