Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creats many problems. To what extend do you agree?
In recent 15 years, internet has been become an effective items in everybody's life which has caused deep concern about the negative impacts. Actually, I agree with the fact that the cutting-edge technology which is called internet, has been making some pressing problems.
About 10 years ago, using the internet had been become domestic which means it had entered to public homes and after a while this advance was transfered as a basic element in people's lives that has assisted them. For instance, people learned how to use web sites to search about information in order to access to a special topic such as cooking, instead of going to a book store and buy a cookbook. So internet has had such great advantages.
Conversely, it has took long time that public have become compatible with the new state-of-art system. I mean techno phones have needed some time for being techno Phyllis hardly. For example a person who was afraid of net first, now wants to transmit the official system which were paper-based before to internet-based and that is not really easy.
In addition, previous generation faced with big issues to teach next one how the world wide web should be operated usefully. To give an example, children have had attitudes toward online games for leisure which waste their time.
Consequently, although internet has too many positive points, it consists of many major problems. In my idea, persons should be taught how to utilize it correctly first, then they try to resolve the technological questions and at last explain for younger members of society to manipulate the new great data source with the best styles.
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