Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this they and age, automobiles are central to human's daily life. While some people believe that these vehicles will become obsolete, many people are of the opinion that the ever-increasing demands of humankind prevents cars from obsolescence. In my view of things, no one cannot ignore the immediacy of cars in today's life and it will remain as an important part in our life. I have some reasons for my opinion, three of which is listed below.
First of all, the cities are growing in a fast pace and even outskirts of cities are considered as an opportunity for future constructions. in other words, everybody should possess these vehicles in order to reach remote regions. for example, when I was a student at a big city, without a personal car, I always had problems with going to recreational places, because they were far from my home.
Second, the technologies of new cars captivate everybody, even those who was not eager to use automobiles. new cars enjoy a lot of technologies that offer higher immune system as well as convenience during riding. For example, new cars utilize a lot of radars that decreases the possibility of accident in high speeds, so even the people who is afraid of driving can use these easy-to-use cars. For purpose of illustration, my father had a bad experience from driving and, in the past, he always avoided driving a car. When he bought her new car, he gradually recovered his self-confidence and used the car. this was due in part to her cars' convenience.
Third, the new codes of life suggest an aristocratic way of life. Many people boast their cars and spend a considerable amount of money on their cars. It goes without saying that, now, cars are a sign of power. For instance, many of celebrities and popular figures have luxurious cars and this becomes habitual. If one of them does not have a luxurious car, people will be surprised.
Given the aforementioned reasons, I believe that due to ever-growing cities, higher technologies in new cars and new lifestyle of people, the people have tendency to use these cars in the future.
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- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: New
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82246143999 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.058636326 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3157894737 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125974303781 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415389549918 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300549653602 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709093970708 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229691145778 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.