A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter
-Thank him/her for inviting you
-Describe how you felt about his/her family members
-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place
Dear C,
This letter finds you in the best of your health and happiness. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your magnificent dinner with you.
It was a great day with you. I was astonished by your friendly behavior of your family. It was not like the first day we met. Moreover I was delighted to taste the scrumptious food provided by you. The chicken was succulent and juicy. Nothing tastes better than the array of delectable dessert and pastries after the food. I could not know your culinary skill if you had not invited me. That was the indelible day to be remembered.
Besides, your home was very charming and I was amazed by your rustic atmosphere. Thank you once again for inviting me. As we planned, we will meet at my countryside in next vacations. We will have great time spending together by doing camps, trekking and eating delicious home cooked food. Also, it will be nice to meet our old friends. I am eagerly waiting for your arrival.
Convey my best wishes to your family.
Yours truly,
ms
- Write a letter to your friend to inform him about your visit to his country.You should say:-Why you chose his country-What have you already planned-Ask for some assistance/information 64
- A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter-Thank him/her for inviting you-Describe how you felt about his/her family members-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
.... It was not like the first day we met. Moreover I was delighted to taste the scrumptiou...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t wishes to your family. Yours truly, ms
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4408502991 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4046529087 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.7777777778 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.2777777778 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232137085159 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809439106362 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799310618939 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141580822001 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708329254383 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.21 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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