Quesn: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is accepted by all that the role of parents are not negligible for upbringing their children. Some people believe that parents are the finest teachers for children because they form the fundamental basics of their children. It’s true as a teacher parents are crucial for a child but I strongly disagree that parents are the best teachers for their children. This essay will discuss the details that school teachers are far better than parents.
First of all, it is undoubtedly true that parents are inseparable part of the children life because they are highly influenced by their parents behavior and occupation but I think the role of a teacher always beyond parents when its matter of education. Most of the times parents have to remain busy with their individual work. They have no enough time to keep update themselves with the present education system. On the other hand, teachers pass most of the time by searching and preparation education materials for children. They always update their teaching methodology. For example, when I was in undergrad one of my teacher Dr. x always taught us through modern technology as well as he collected different sorts of materials from internet and delivered it to us. As a result, I think pedagogues are better than parents as a teacher.
Secondly, it is true that parents will not be specialist in every sector. They are may be genius on their own sector. That’s why most of the time parents become unable to teach their children in a special field. For example, after the certain age a child showed his enormous talents on music. If he/she wants to boost up this talent definitely the child has to go to a musician to increase his/her expertise. Thus I think teachers play more crucial role in a child’s life than parents.
Finally, it is said that colleges and universities are amazing place for making students social under the guidance of teachers. For example when I was a college students I had to study a course named “friends for life”. This course mainly discussed about the importance of friends along with how to be a good human in a society. As a result, it can be seen that most of the friendships are formed in university and college life. Moreover, Most of the humanitarian activists are also emerged from university graduates. Thus the role of a teachers always greater than parents.
In conclusion, Schools and colleges are the best places for a child’s complete development under the supervision of teachers though the parents are also important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
... university graduates. Thus the role of a teachers always greater than parents. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94638694639 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74921541614 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491841491841 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3653216915 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848901331002 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274089784693 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310870484374 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539081946264 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187886236278 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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