The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2000 and 2011.
The vertical chart depicts the information about the number of rentals and sales of films by a particle store between the year of 2002 and 2011.The data is calibrated in numbers. It is clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that in terms of rentals the sales was approximately (around 180000 )in 2012 whereas, VHS and DVD sales had showed a 80,000 and 45000 sales. In addition to this, in 2003 the dvd sales had rised up to 10,000.Similarly, in 2004 rentals and VHS sales was showed approximately same ratio but DVD sales had suddenly inclined by 180000. Moreover in 2005 rentals, vhs sales and DVD sales was showed a ratio around ( 150,000, 10,000 and 200,000) respectively.
Prohibing ahead, in 2006 vhs sales had no ratio but, the rentals and DVD sales had been showed a similar ratio. Likewise, in 2007 the blue rays sales begin by 5,000 whereas, rentals and DVD sales was similar ratio. Meanwhile in 2008 to 2011 DVD sales and rental sales are declined but BluRay sales was slightly incline up to 10,000 sales.
Overall it is evident that maximum sales was in 2007 by a particular store and minimum was in 2002 in four different store.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...2 whereas, VHS and DVD sales had showed a 80,000 and 45000 sales. In addition to ...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ition to this, in 2003 the dvd sales had rised up to 10,000.Similarly, in 2004 re...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...3 the dvd sales had rised up to 10,000.Similarly, in 2004 rentals and VHS sales was show...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... sales had suddenly inclined by 180000. Moreover in 2005 rentals, vhs sales and DVD sale...
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Line 2, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and DVD sales was showed a ratio around 150,000, 10,000 and 200,000 respectively...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... blue rays sales begin by 5,000 whereas, rentals and DVD sales was similar ratio....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...entals and DVD sales was similar ratio. Meanwhile in 2008 to 2011 DVD sales and rental sa...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'inclined'.
Suggestion: inclined
... declined but BluRay sales was slightly incline up to 10,000 sales. Overall it is evid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66502463054 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5764629954 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0597139736 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256633597421 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1464912244 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067941321604 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189352663344 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732981017295 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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