In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas.
Why do you think that is?
What problems can this cause?
In this contemporary era, living in towns and cities has become the first preference of each individual. Hence, migration from villages to urban cities is the obvious fact followed by different nations. This essay will depict the reasons behind this notion as well as certain solutions that can arise due to this practice.
As a starting point, let us have a glance at why people are following this habit? Firstly, modernization is the key that attracts individuals towards modern towns. The quest to adapt the up dated lifestyle allure them towards the modernised areas. To put in other words, in order to experience the Western outfits, foods as well as grooming habits, individuals switch their preferences from traditional ones. Secondly, urban areas offer immense amenities in all respects comparative to the remote areas. As an illustration, shopping malls, metros, health care centres are somewhat always grab attention of human beings. Moreover, metropolitan cities are considered as an employment hub which provide pool of job prospects, that one cannot achieve while living in villages.
Therefore, none can deny that various problems can be introduced due to such practice. Human beings can experience severe health issues due to air and noise pollution. For example, Cancer is the hazardous disease imposed by pollution only. Similarly, cultural and traditional values can lost their significance. The reason behind is adaptation of western culture influence teenagers to lose their identity. What is more, moving to towns can lead to excelled living expenses which cannot be met by following 24*7 work practice.
To sum up, the trend of migration from villages to cities has increased tremendously. Despite knowing the facts of imposed health concerns, still demos are intetested to practice western culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42456140351 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78549644742 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6564668601 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191813845941 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497200524041 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414406736276 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096550381013 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425168775242 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.