People are getting married and having their children in their thirty's rather than in young age. Do you think its positive or negative development.
Nowadays, mindset of youth has been changed in regards of family planning. Young generation tends to have their babies once they are thirty years old. In my opinion, this trend is significant for our society as this development is helpful in child care.
To begin with, planning a family is consider as a huge responsibility for parents. Every mom and dad tend to provide all facilities to his child for his personality development. All these necessities can be fulfill only if parents are financially well and in most of the cases this is possible in later stage of life. I remember, my uncle blessed with a baby when he was 35 years old and was passed through the challenges that an individual face in early stage of his career and now enjoying parenthood.
In addition, lifestyle of people has been changed due to globalization. After the marriage, it takes time for couples to establish a strong relationship which is necessary in sharing the responsibilities. Once such relationship establishes, a child can have adequate attention from mother and father. As a result, a strong bond develops in the family. For example, as per the survey recently conducted by times of india parents who divide the responsibilities in daily household work are living happily with their children.
In a nutshell, this is highly important for parents to plans their kids after becoming financially stable and mature enough to take the responsibilities of family. This trend indeed gives highly qualified and well-mannered children to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...days, mindset of youth has been changed in regards of family planning. Young generation tends...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... To begin with, planning a family is consider as a huge responsibility for parents. E...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10317460317 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07655124263 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8446534357 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971956708411 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333998665413 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512307645164 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629465408316 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330829343532 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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