Countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage other countries.
The topic to address is countries should believe in cooperation rather than isolation. This topic is important because it serves as major decision for smooth running of the country. I agree with the idea that countries should cooperate with each other because it may lead them to support each other in difficult times.
The first reason that enables me to believe in countries cooperation is that it results in trade between countries. Such trade of items allows one country to earn from other nations. This earning is necessary for government to provide quality education, health facilities and hygenic food to its citizens. Therefore, in order for countries to earn more, cooperation between them is necessary.
The second major reason of cooperation between countries is to help them in difficult times. For example, if one country is left behind such that it has no any basic resources to run prosperously, then other countries may help them in funding. This is not always unidirectional, it might be the case that the helping country fall back. Thus, it will be morally applicable to the previously helped country to help fallen back nation. Therefore, it is clear that, this cycle is only possible with cooperation between countries.
Finally, it is also necessary for citizens of one nation to know about the cultrue of other countries. Since this helps them to gain experience about life of alien people and adopt some of their good qualities. Although, the citizens might be enthusiastic to learn about other cultures, an isolated government can deprive them from such learning. Therefore, in order for government to allow its citizens to experience other cultures, it must cooperate with other parts of the world, so that they issue visa to its citizens without any hindrance.
Thus, It agree with idea of cooperation instead of isolation because cooperation is bilaterally advantageous for smooth running between countries and development of their citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...country is left behind such that it has no any basic resources to run prosperously...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t the cultrue of other countries. Since this helps them to gain experience about lif...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'agrees'?
Suggestion: agrees
...tizens without any hindrance. Thus, It agree with idea of cooperation instead of iso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2106918239 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78630016559 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48427672956 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2809479304 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239565042564 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804112826248 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520381569826 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13476496034 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013258173857 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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