The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
"Many hands make light work." This sagacious saying demonstrates that people have always been aware of the benefits of cooperation. Indeed, many research projects are carried out by teams of cooperative scientists in a more efficient way than by singletons. However, when it comes to leadership, where only the best ones can become leaders, cooperation is subdued by competition. Many benefits are lost, but the nature of leadership entails by itself that people will have to compete in order to be promoted to the high positions. I believe that the prompt presents us with a Hobson's choice; a suc...
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Sentence: And, to demostrate that they are adroit and capable of assuming such a high responsability, young people will have to show that they are better suited for the position than their peers.
Error: responsability Suggestion: responsibility
Error: demostrate Suggestion: demonstrate
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