Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour.
Therefore working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree
In the modern era, improvement and advancement in the technology and automation is well known by people. Nowadays, less time is required to perform any difficult task. These days, there is an ongoing debate that working hours should be reduced as advancement in technology has reduced the time required to do the job. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view by giving supportive examples.
Businessman claims that employees should spend same amount of time which was spent before the technology era. Before technology time it was an industrial era, in which employees were required to do hard work and to spend around twelve hours a days. For instance, a study done in United Nations, revealed that employees daily working hours before 1980 were approximately twelve hours a day. Therefore, now as the technology advancement is seen on its verge the working hours should be reduced.
Similarly, reducing working hours will have significant impact on the health of people. Employees will have better social, mental and physical health. For example, a survey done in early 21st century showed that people who spend less working hours are happier and enjoying healthy life. Hence, the businessmen, government institutes and other organizations should think seriously about reducing the working hours.
In a nutshell, with the development in the technology and automation, the time to perform various projects is reduced. Thus, working hours should be decreased. The essay discussed the main advantage of reducing working hours and its positive impact on our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28968253968 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72203421536 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.407996151 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341320713697 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123305671694 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912645298413 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214031230473 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177613807992 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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