In many modern societies, grandchildren spend any time with their grandparents.
What do you think are the consequences of this?
In the modern world, family’s relationship is a discussed topic. One of them is the time grandchildren spend with their grandparents. In this essay I will further explain the consequences of this and give my opinion.
Sociologists claim that family relationships has different concepts in different countries, heritage and culture. For instance families from Latin background tend to be closer than others background. Therefore, it is ordinary in a house of a family from Latin background we have a grandparent living together. For instance, in Italian families it is very common take the grandmother to live in your house instead to enrolled her on an Aged care house. However, in Australia, Aged care houses are very common.
Despite the differences of culture and background, some people believe that be closer to your grandparents has some advantages. First, grandparents have the most information from your family and can tell stories that will make you know better your family. Second, grandparents has more free time to take care of the children, especially when both parents work, a hand from grandparents can be very useful. Third, it is important to an ageing feel useful and for some of them be useful helping educating their grandchildren is very reward.
On the other hand, there are some concerned about how much liberty the grandparents has on children education. Some people believe that it is very vital to set boundaries. For example, nowadays both parents need to work and they ask for grandparents take care of their kids. However, if they do not have a clear conversation about boundaries this can become a family issue. In addition, some parents do not have a good relationship with their parents and this has a consequence on grandchildren, which will be private to spend time with their grandparents.
This essay discussed the relationship between grandparent and grandchildren. In my opinion, spend time with your grandparent is beneficial for grandchildren and vice versa. However, it is important for the family work together and set boundaries to make sure that all roles can be respected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to educate' or 'educate'.
Suggestion: to educate; educate
... and for some of them be useful helping educating their grandchildren is very reward. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng their grandchildren is very reward. On the other hand, there are some concer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, in addition, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21220930233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08701631902 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7418887277 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.65 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196254132083 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707968079881 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109958009911 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147145912169 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116142350191 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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