Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only for their own heath but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your opinion.
Millennial's are central drivers of this worldwide shift away from consuming animal products. But the plant-based movement is bigger than any one generation. Vegetarians tend to avoid consuming meat and fish for the purpose of keeping body health and for social responsibility towards the growing environmental concerns. I believe, that the benefits of this new consumer trend increases health food order and plant based eating may reduce the impact on global environmental issues. This will be discussed further in the essay with relevant examples.
Plant-based eating may not be entirely mainstream yet. But, it’s becoming more accepted every day. The shift in people's eating habits is mainly due to health benefits. Scientific research shows that health benefits increase as the amount of food from animal sources in the diet decreases, so vegan diets are the healthiest overall. For example, vegetarian diet is naturally low in saturated fat, high in fiber, and replete with cancer-protective phytochemicals—help to prevent cancer. Furthermore, people chose for weight loss and keeping up with body-shape. Moreover, choosing to consume vegetables rather than meat or fish becomes a trend to keep the body healthy, a trend popularized by high profile celebrities.
In addition, the idea that being vegetarian is better for the environment has, over the last forty years, become a piece of conventional wisdom. Consequently, recent guidelines by World Health Organisation suggests that plant-based diets would reduce the carbon footprints. For instance, the amount of grain and land used to produce a pound of beef, as well as the volume of methane the animals produce, the nation’s intake of beef has significant environmental ramifications, particularly in terms of greenhouse gas emissions. Thus, a larger group of people are choosing to be vegetarians and committing efforts to save the planet.
In conclusion, people choose to eat no meat or fish for both health and environmental reasons. In my opinion, both factors are significant and hence being a vegetarian is a smarter lifestyle choice. With such benefits, WHO should press governments to take initiatives to create awareness globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19051362051 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2543491837 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9473684211 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186515560991 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056208268553 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056414008552 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116358782383 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392236985121 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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